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dede @2003-03-31 20:26:55我有些少唔同的看法，人物的背景雖然景深唔算淺，但取景角度及人物與背景位置安排恰當，顏色也有明顯的不同，人物主要的上半身放在山景中，沒有因背景而混肴主體，也沒有因背景的線條將人物斬頭斬頸，拍者也很小心留意到。
人物表情方便，就是要將model的沉思拍下，呢方面也達到了。捨去特寫而拍取半身，也是為了配合model的視線下垂方向。
但有一點呢張相取得窄了些，model看來很修長，改善此點可將人物從腰部以下的crop去，但為了適合3R的度，也沒法了。
少少分享，也是我個人的喜好，不算得是甚麼意見。 -
hkhei @2003-03-31 10:51:49好多謝John Strauss兄o既回應
關於主題，因為我都係跟風post下相，有時又冇諗唔到打乜野好
所以先打左呢個無聊o既主題:p
另外，model 雖然唔係望住我
但係我覺得呢個表情同角度幾好
所以先影低到post上黎
其實呢張相我係用dc影...所以淺景深方面我真係無能為力，我都有o的係o係菲林機影o既，希望效果會好o的啦
>No trousers is much better.
呢個我真係無留意添><
不過我post o個陣都見到另一個構圖問題，就係cut左隻手...
但係如果我唔cut手，頭上面o既空間可能會太多(其實我都已經crop走左少少上面o既空間！)
請問大家有乜野好建議~可以改善呢o的問題呢？
最後，我冇當呢度係私人相簿
我post相上黎o既原因其實就係想人指教下...呢的相當然算唔上係"masterpiece"，但係如果連呢o的都唔post..我驚我一張都冇得post>< -
John Strauss @2003-03-31 09:00:57This is the first time that I comment your photo because I find a lot of flaw!
You should have more communication with model because I think that she is looking for something and thinking. Besides, the composition is no good as I found the background is very clear that cannot emphasis the image of model. As Chinese in 淺景深".
No trousers is much better.
Moreover, each photo should be a suitable title. Your title "我又post張talie先", it is a big flaw because it is meaningless!
In this case, please consider why you post your photo in DC Fever. The purpose of photo-submit centre is to upload your masterpiece but not for photo album. Please understand. -
boring_egg @2003-03-31 01:25:44>_< 好!
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dede @2003-03-31 00:38:16一個難得客串的好model
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hkhei @2003-03-31 00:18:32我都覺得佢好靚:p
而且好自然~~ -
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